Monday, November 16, 2009

Sketch #5 Crackers

1 comment:

margaret said...

Another beautiful story. I especially admire

The milky way sprung up out of the mountains beyond, and ranged over our bodies.

That's nice writing.

And also, it takes a brave man to admit his dog pissed him off. Everybody wants to be the guy who loves his great dog, so it's nice to have you admit your dog was as imperfect as anyone. It makes Cracker more real to the reader. He's just another well-intentioned galoot walking the earth.